I will particular like to see the Pegasus bridge itself
Good luck with this map man. I think it can be as big as Purple Heart lane to afford for what appears to human-flown gliders in the first shot, and especially German armor. You may want to give them distance from the battlefront so that the commandos get a breather after they cap the bridge before the armored counter-attack.
Also, include as many deployable weapons as possible. I would really like to see the Commandos set up a perimeter defense. For some of these, you can have it such that, once a German mg is destroyed, it is redeployed facing the German axis of advance, so that it seems as though some of the German equipment was captured and used.
Great map, man, This one actually makes me happy. Perhaps get in touch with an official dev (mapper) and see if he can't help you get this map to official standard - Who knows, that way it might actually make it in one day